This is eerie, as just this AM I was surveying the protagonist in my novel and sensed this polarity problem/split you highlighted.
I needed to go back, re-read chunks, and move him into the: "lead character to be a wish fulfillment... embodying old school rugged, masculine traits" rubric.
Thank you for a nice wake-up call, Tony. And continued success with your screenplay!
The Character Revision Pass
Once again, this is all gold. Thank you for sharing your insights.
This is a great post. Very helpful. Thank you.
This is great! Thank you for taking the time.
This is eerie, as just this AM I was surveying the protagonist in my novel and sensed this polarity problem/split you highlighted.
I needed to go back, re-read chunks, and move him into the: "lead character to be a wish fulfillment... embodying old school rugged, masculine traits" rubric.
Thank you for a nice wake-up call, Tony. And continued success with your screenplay!