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Josh Bernhard's avatar

Once again, this is all gold. Thank you for sharing your insights.

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Paul Worthington's avatar

This is a great post. Very helpful. Thank you.

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Lukas Kendall's avatar

This is great! Thank you for taking the time.

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Frederick Woodruff's avatar

This is eerie, as just this AM I was surveying the protagonist in my novel and sensed this polarity problem/split you highlighted.

I needed to go back, re-read chunks, and move him into the: "lead character to be a wish fulfillment... embodying old school rugged, masculine traits" rubric.

Thank you for a nice wake-up call, Tony. And continued success with your screenplay!

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